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Losing youYou runaway because you  Can't cope anymore  
Deep down inside you don't  Know what it is that your looking for  
I have no choice but to stand back  
And to let you walk away  
There's no point in me asking you to stay  
I'm not sure if you care about me at all  
Not hearing from you makes me climb the walls  
 
 
You told me that you loved me to pieces  
But i ask myself did you ever mean it  
It is tearing me apart and i can't be free  Please someone come and release me  
Are u going through the same as i am  
We can get through this I know that we can  
S Losing you
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I love youYou light up my life.  
And take away my pain  
Then you disappear  
And it still remains  
I think about you during  
The day and the night  
But babe now i'm begging  
For you to stay.  
 
 
 
You have made me happy  
You also made me sad  
But being with you were  
The best days that i ever had  
You mean the world to me  
Oh why can't you see  
I will take you to a place  
Where we can be free  
 
 
 
To have you back in my life  
Is what i want more than anything  
If you were here with me  
I would have all i ever I love you
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DistanceYou speak about him  
As if he was here  
You think it was something  
That you did or that  
You are not loved no more  
Your lost in a new place  
And feel all alone  
You cry and i wipe the  
Tears away from your eyes  
 
 
 
I want to hold you and make  
Everything feel alright.  
I want you to be smiling  
Just like my little boy used to  
I want you to know that you are  
Still loved very much by both  
Your mum and dad and that we  
Will always be here for you no  
Matter how near or far away that we are  
 
 
 
Somet Distance
by ~lostsoul05
AloneI want someone to be there.  For me from day to day.  But am to scared to allow it to happen.  I want to be happy and want to be me  
Want to let all the afraid emotions out.  To finally be set free.  I want to love again and be settled down.  But know that it is not good for someone.  To get involved with me as they will get hurt.   
 
 
Where am i going wrong in my life.  Why can't i do this things right.  I make one big mess of things.  The only thing i did right was for me.  To have my son.  He is my whole entire life and is.  The one thing that keep Alone
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Sun Feb 13, 2005, 9:02 AM
Hey all

Well another journal entry from me. i'm not sure how i am feeling at the moment am still trying to stay strong but is not always easy. i am going away for a week tomorrow so won't be around .. but will have plenty of time to think and sort out my head or at least try to . hope you all look after yourselfs and that you keep posting all your good poetry for me to read when i come back
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~i-am-alchemy May 11, 2008, 10:50:35 AM
you've got a good start on your poetry. you have some grammatical errors every now and then but for the most part your pretty okay. i had some trouble reading some of it with the way you punctuated things. sometimes you add a period where there doesn't need to be one which makes the reading choppy and interrupts the flow. but i still think you have a pretty good start. if you ever need critique or help with grammar don't hesitate to ask.

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~Kitty-Neko002 May 7, 2005, 4:04:57 PM
thanks for adding me to ur watch list =) i was looking through all ur poems and ur really good at them!! i luv them all keep up the good work ^^
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~lostsoul05 May 14, 2005, 12:12:53 PM
Thanks .. i have been through a few hard months after splitting up with my ex so as u can probably tell all my poems are about how i'm still feeling .. I have read through yours as well and they are good keep them coming
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~Kitty-Neko002 May 14, 2005, 1:14:44 PM
Yea i know how that is, thats what mine are usually about to, i like writing poems when im feeling lonley so then its one way to get rid of some of those feelings... if that makes sense neways but yea thanks and cant wait to see more =)
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~lostsoul05 May 17, 2005, 3:12:00 PM
Yeah it made perfect sense to me mate as i see that the only way to get rid of how your feeling is to write them down . thanks i hope to see somemore of yours as well


take care
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~acidrain14 Feb 14, 2005, 6:38:51 PM
happy valentine's day :heart: :hug:

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~acidrain14 Feb 6, 2005, 7:00:01 AM
:) hi

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:heart: when there is love the heart is bright, where there is love the day is bright..when trouble surrounds me and no one understands i place my cares in someone's open hands :hug:
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~lostsoul05 Feb 6, 2005, 7:04:28 AM
Hey have entered a few more poems today .. seems i am writing loads lately should get a poem book and write them all in there lol
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~acidrain14 Feb 6, 2005, 7:06:17 AM
lol

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:heart: when there is love the heart is bright, where there is love the day is bright..when trouble surrounds me and no one understands i place my cares in someone's open hands :hug:
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~lostsoul05 Jan 30, 2005, 6:45:28 PM
Thanks for the help frogpuff

am slowly getting used to it now lol
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